Nowdays, actors play a vital role in the life of people. Media tracked famous people a lot and their mostly news are related to celebreties. So many, people are interested in them. There are various reason, why media interested in them. I think negative impacts are more which i will discuss in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to indicate that mostly people think about actors as a their role model. Media follow them because people follow actors brand and want to know more about their personal life. Famous people also has no objection because it increase their fan following as well as trp list. Indirectly it is also benefical for news channels because they get more views. Modern people wants to lead a artifical life. That is why they are more interested in celebreties life as compared to their own life.
On the other hand, it has negative impacts a lot because it destroy the privacy of famous people. Many actor do not want to introduce their family to world because of saftey purposebut media spoil everything. So many information about their family and location, some time put them in trouble. Many famous people want to forget their bad ocassions but media has not stop. Sometimes these kinds of activity mentaly torcher them. Many time media gave fake knowledge about their relations because people are so interested to know about their life partner but it creats some problem in their personal life.
In conlusion, media is so interested in famous peoples' life. It has negative impact a lot. In my perspective, media do not give any personal knowledge about the life of famous people and start more concentrate on other news. Individuals also take a less interest in actors. They just see them for entertainment purpose.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89297658863 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46956394917 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47491638796 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8574431484 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5909090909 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266610072344 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09747362799 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084984286573 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208985428191 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556243912993 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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