The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the US and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.
According to the two figures, the graph represents the proportion of committed offenders in the UK by different age groups and sexes, and the pie chart displays a comparison regarding the percentage of convicted criminals in different sexes.
It is obvious that the number of male convicts is always higher than female in all the age groups. The amount of criminality hits the high point in both sexes particularly in adolescence, while male criminals are triple of female ones. There is a significant discrepancy showed in two sexes of people in jail in the pie chart.
The conviction rates of both genders illustrate a similar trend from all the age groups. At the age of 10, the female and male offenders are 0% and 2% respectively. From then on, the conviction rate of youth boys soars to 16% at the age of 20, which is the highest percentage throughout the age range. In the meantime, a steady increase is showed on the conviction rate in youth girls, reaching 5% at the age of 20. Afterwards, the volume of criminality starts tuning down in both male and female, gradually declining to 2% and 0%.
Given all the age groups, the percentage of male prisoners is remarkably larger than that of female ones. Therefore, it shows a proportion that men outnumbered women with a ratio of 24 to 1.
- The table below shows the estimated oil capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day, from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. 67
- The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years with projections for the future Earnings are in US dollars 90
- The charts below show information on crime in the US for 2002 Write a report for a universal lecturer describing the information below 81
- The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the US and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74449339207 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83186252506 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515418502203 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7375720247 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354962684678 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128437778275 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03536936516 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206294238081 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353584462719 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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