the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two plans illustrating alterations in road access to a hospital over three years since 2007.
As can be seen, in 2007, the city hospital was surrounded by Ring Road providing a direct connection to Hospital Rd and car park. The hospital Rd made a link between City Road stretching from east to west on the southern of the plan and Ring Road and the car park is a rectangular land adjacent to three aforementioned roads servicing people, by and large. Furthermore, there had been six bus stops along either sides of Hospital Rd facilitating users to reach the hospital by using public transportation system.
Forward three years, in 2010, some visible modifications took place. A new public car constructed to the east of the Ring Road and the previous one dedicated only to staffs. Moreover, two traffic circles were added to the ends of hospital Rd at the intersections with Ring Road and City Road making routes to different destinations specifically the new bus station which was located to the west of the hospital Rd and created more space as a substitute for former bus stops.
Overall, from 2007 to 2010 some changes occurred to road networks. A public car was added and bus stops were replaced by a spatial bus station facilitating the access to hospital. However, the hospital building and three main roads remained intact during these three years.
- people nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past what do you think is the reason behind this what are the effects in individuals and people around them 53
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- Everybody should expect to have more than one career these days To what extend do you agree or disagree 59
- the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- the urban transport system receives more funds compared to the rural transport system.why do you think is so?how can it be solved? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
... large. Furthermore, there had been six bus stops along either sides of Hospital Rd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91845493562 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79048519806 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3793293517 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221453457719 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967715459356 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052358128194 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154618626194 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196052214025 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.