Everybody should expect to have more than one career these days.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
A controversy has arisen over the issue of whether additional occupations are warranted to be taken or not. In spite of all arguments in favor of having a specific job, as the society has witnessed a crippled economy and job insecurity recently, it is evident that more careers would bring about more safety into lives.
First of all, the current economic climate has brought in its wake a variety detrimental effects one of which is the low value of currency. Due to this fact, more efforts are required to supply the fundamental requirements. Accepting different jobs can be considered as a good solution benefiting people from more salary to afford the needs. For instance, in the past, it was possible to rent a flat with 200$ per month. Today, nonetheless, twofold expenditure is needed to provide the aforementioned house. Never could an individual afford this vast amount of money unless by contributing to more activities.
Even more disturbing, though, is the lack of job security. Determined to run a business effectively, companies are inclined to hire experts with magnificent qualities even at a cost to their own experienced employees. This new approach impel people to look for more jobs to guarantee their financial status. Indeed, had job security existed, staff would have concentrated more on their own responsibilities instead of looking for additional occupations to save a substitute for a rainy day.
By way of conclusion, I reaffirmed my position that due to current social issues entailing economic problems and job insecurity, people need to accept more jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...st, it was possible to rent a flat with 200$ per month. Today, nonetheless, twofold ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, nonetheless, so, for instance, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18992248062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03739735717 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0596690622 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946104787386 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315179085383 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027611211023 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056696890079 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200721081568 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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