The given maps illustrates about the way to get into the city hospital during two years, 2007 and 2010. The map clearly shows that there has been some several significant developmental change occured in these 3 years.
One of the major change is about the establishment of the two new roundabouts, one connecting the city road with the hospital road, where as other one is at the hospital entrance connecting with ring road. Additionally, in 2007 there was only one car parking area for both hospital staffs and public, but now the old south eastern bus stop is replaced with staff only car parking area and there is a new separate car parking lot for public at the eastern side of the hospital.
Another change can be seen at the south western part of the hospital, a new bus station is constructed in 2010 with a two way entrance, this place was used as a bus stop in 2007.
However, there is no change at the northern side of the ring road.
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- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 61
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...into the city hospital during two years, 2007 and 2010. The map clearly shows tha...
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...mental change occured in these 3 years. One of the major change is about the est...
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...stablishment of the two new roundabouts, one connecting the city road with the ho...
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...g the city road with the hospital road, where as other one is at the hospital entrance c...
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... the south western part of the hospital, a new bus station is constructed in 2010...
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... used as a bus stop in 2007. However, there is no change at the northern side ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56395348837 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48583738542 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9172208764 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183656990342 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099180195525 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694489548021 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106400896178 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596997153714 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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