In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modren era, There will all vehicles run in a automatic mode. The people who will travel inside the car only will be passengers no driver. as far as I concerned that advantages are overlapping the disadvantages. I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the other hand, there will be one advantage of driverless vehicles. The people who don't know how to drive a car. They can easily travel by car to using their automatic mode.
Furthermore to discuss with the disadvantages of automatic car is increasing the accident on the road. In other words, if there is not driver in the car, it will higher chances of accidents. for explicate it, the mascow Times news reveal the data that automatic car will create crime as well as accident. Hence, it can clearly seen that it will help to rise accidents in the community.
Shifting towards the other drawbacks due to driverless vehicles there will be rise the unemployment in the society. Because of, this invention several number of driver will be jobless. In addition, The truck driver and automatic car driver will jobless is the main reason advantages of new creation for instance the survey conducted by New York Times in the United States of America will that a proximately 90% of driver will be jobless due to this invention as I as a result it will be a big reason of unemployment in the society.
By the way of conclusion although it will increase a unemployment and accident yet it will be beneficial for the those person who don't know how to drive
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a automatic mode" with adverb for "automatic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...modren era, There will all vehicles run in a automatic mode. The people who will travel inside the ...
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Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ren era, There will all vehicles run in a automatic mode. The people who will tra...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... car only will be passengers no driver. as far as I concerned that advantages are ...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... car only will be passengers no driver. as far as I concerned that advantages are ...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... of driverless vehicles. The people who dont know how to drive a car. They can easil...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...y car to using their automatic mode. Furthermore to discuss with the disadvantages of au...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...r, it will higher chances of accidents. for explicate it, the mascow Times news re...
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Line 6, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... chances of accidents. for explicate it, the mascow Times news reveal the data th...
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Line 8, column 144, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
...the society. Because of, this invention several number of driver will be jobless. In addition,...
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Line 10, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of conclusion although it will increase a unemployment and accident yet it will b...
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Line 10, column 114, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...ident yet it will be beneficial for the those person who dont know how to drive
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Line 10, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... be beneficial for the those person who dont know how to drive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, by the way, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7191011236 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74005299545 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483146067416 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.5007381469 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397327932239 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143783730701 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995409403522 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234905775379 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985505489701 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.