The given two piecharts illustrate the different modes of communication (Phone,Letter and Computer ) preferred in 2 different years 1962 and 1982 respectively .
It is noticeable from both the charts that as year advances , phone dominated all other means of communication whereas , Letter which was popular in the year 1962 almost vanished after 20 years.
It can be clearly seen that in 1962, half of the population (50%) depend on letters to convey messages to each other whereas, phone was on its slow progression in the field of communication and contributed only 35 % .Probing further , the least popular one on the same year was the Computer which constituted almost 15%.
While considering the year 1982, the dominance of letter which was common in 1962 dramatically reduced to one in ten (10 %) after 20 years. Surprisingly, it was phone which substituted the letter and contributed almost similar percentage as that of letter . Moving forward , the use of computers gradually doubled (30%) in 2 years .
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- The two pie charts show the types of communication used in 1962 and 1982. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant. 73
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- Eventhough globalization affects the world's economic in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...te the different modes of communication Phone,Letter and Computer preferred in...
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...ommunication Phone,Letter and Computer preferred in 2 different years 1962 and ...
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... communication and contributed only 35 % .Probing further , the least popular one ...
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...n ten 10 % after 20 years. Surprisingly, it was phone which substituted the lette...
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...mputers gradually doubled 30% in 2 years .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1975308642 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0236349965 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3228716418 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972728524787 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558102607601 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373275891892 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716769879188 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319332367863 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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