It is undeniable that the demand for water is increasing in many countries and it is a fact that the primary cause of this is the limited source of water bodies such as freshwater ponds ,lakes and so on. Discussed in the following paragraphs are the causative factors of increased water demand along with the remedial measures. To begin with, the demand for freshwater has aroused when people became more health conscious. In other words, a major section of people is concerned about their wellbeing and also aware about the role of pure drinking water on health . A socio economic survey conducted by India Today in the year 2018 reported that 65 percent of people who consume water from impure sources are affected with diseases such as cholera, leptospirosis and dysentery . The government can curb this problem by issuing properly treated drinking water and also by availing the supply of purifiers in each house. Yet another reason for increasing demand of water is the replenishment of natural water resources due to rapid urbanization and industrialisation. The burgeoning factories and industries not only make these sources vanish but also , use and waste water from the remaining sources.This would make the life of people more difficult. To exemplify, a recent study shows that 80 percent of water from rivers ,lakes and ponds are utilized by construction companies and automobile service centres. Implementation of rigorous rules and regulations by the authority can solve this problem.The amount of water drawn from such sources should also be limited . To sum up, the need for freshwater is rising nowadays.It is mainly due to awareness of people impure water can cause and also due to wastage of water in occupational sectors.supply of pure water in homes and limiting the overuse of water in industries can curb this issue to a great extent.
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- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86477785674 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544262295082 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.799232115 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.818181818 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139290901823 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646647632191 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490563992545 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139290901823 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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