writng task 1 ielts academic
table
The given diagram gives information about how much Australians were charged for a cup of coffee in six different cities over a period of 4 years.
Overall, while other cities witnessed a significant increase in the cost of coffee between 2010 and 2014, Brisbane’s residents still paid the same amount of money for coffee after 4 years. Additionally, the greatest change was seen in the coffee cost of Melbourne whereas Sydney remained the most expensive city to buy a cup of coffee from.
Looking at the table in more detail, it is clear that there was a slightly upward trend in the cost of coffee for Canberra, Adelaide and Perth with the degrees of change in coffee price standing at around 6.5 %. Especially, both in 2010 and 2014, city dwellers in Canberra paid the lowest amount of money for their coffee-drinking habit when compares with those in other urban areas.
Regarding the remaining cities, the highest costs of coffee were seen in Melbourne and Sydney from 2010 to 2014 with the figures in 2014 being $2.9 for Melbourne and $3.17 for Sydney. However, surprisingly, the price of a cup of coffee in Brisbane, which was $2.25, remained unchanged over the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inking habit when compares with those in other urban areas. Regarding the rema...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, still, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87064676617 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61170872204 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.4542190596 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.857142857 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0124399934522 0.215688989381 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00649589247467 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159116219869 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00766465170306 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013275566172 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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