Dear Janvi,
Hope this epistle of mine finds you in relishing health. I really miss you since the time you left and thank you for the beautiful postcard of last month. The purpose of penning down this letter is that I need your assistance for finding a part-time job for me.
You will be thrilled to hear about my study plan in Australia. I had applied for the Masters in Artificial Intelligence and last week got the approval letter from the university. I will be joining my session in the next three months, and the course will run for three years. It will be the best time to explore the city and study what I love.
Meanwhile, I want you to look from your connections. I have already looked for accommodation near the university area. It will be better if I start to earn for the rent and livelihood, as Australia is new for me so to understand it the culture, language, tradition and for my comprehensive development a part-time job will be a booster.
I am attaching my resume with this missive. Hope to see you soon and please write me down the things you may require from India, I have already packed your favorite mango pickle.
looking for an optimistic reply regarding the job opportunity.
Yours truly,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...y packed your favorite mango pickle. looking for an optimistic reply regarding the j...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64090909091 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6585702676 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586363636364 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8401537145 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9285714286 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34575495126 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11790913346 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834318046318 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184795506985 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971569966131 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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