You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pictures depict the layout of the current and future Norbiton Industrial Area.
In general, the town will undergo a dramatic transformation in the future, except the roundabout’s location at the centre of the town. In addition, a wide range of resident facilities will be built in the centre of the town.
Currently, the town is surrounded by a road on the south and a river on the north, which separates it from the farmland. The entrance to the town is from the road on the southern end. From there, it leads to a roundabout, which when turned to the right side, takes you out of the town to a factory. Factories are located around the roundabout and its exit from the town.
In the future plan, the entrance will be turned into a small roundabout, which will make the means of transport more versatile. A road will be built to link the new roundabout to the old roundabout, which will be surrounded by a new medical centre, new shops, and three exits. The first exit from the old roundabout on the right side will stay unchanged; however, it will lead to a school and three ranges of housing and a playground will be constructed on both sides of it. The new exit will be located on the northern-west, which will go to a new housing area, and a new housing area will be built on the right side of it. The new second exit will be located straight from the entrance to the south. And on the left side of this exit, a new housing area will be constructed. This exit will link the town to the old farmland location, where there will be a new road and a new housing area by a road over the river. The old one will be moved to the east of the river.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 626, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... will be built on the right side of it. The new second exit will be located straigh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 1.00243902439 1696% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33440514469 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52421610794 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.382636655949 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4672297257 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753350300916 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423224858568 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394631191211 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077933372472 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453849644695 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.