Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns
and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Urbanization is a common trend that is spreading all over the world. This led to the decline of open spaces for trees and housing. There are valid arguments about whether trees or housing should occupy more space. In my opinion, housing should be a priority, and I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.
Nowadays, the world has had to deal with a huge problem of housing deficiency due to the increasing migration of people from rural areas to urban areas, forming densely populated cities. This means the cost of a house has grown significantly, and this is the major reason people cannot afford a house, an apartment, or even rent a house. For example, according to the statistics of Ha Noi National University, in 2021, the price of a house rose three times compared to that in 2012 as a result of the mass migration from the countryside to the city in search of jobs at that time. In addition, housing shortages may force people to live in poor conditions ranging from unsanitary conditions to the growing rate of crime.
Admittedly, trees play an essential role in the air and environment. For instance, they bring fresh air, lower the temperature, and reduce global warming. However, due to the unrest that the housing deficit may cause, governments should implement policies for most land to be used for housing and an appropriate amount of land for trees.
To summarise, housing scarcity is a critical problem that may cause an insecure living environment for individuals. Therefore, it should be addressed immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8598914822 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.5746266183 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138401799571 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584388806619 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604059214664 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811198979308 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566360593385 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.