You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The provided table compares the amount of fish the city of Perth in Australia caught and imported from 2004 to 2014, with one-year intervals.
Overall, it is apparent that Perth had more fresh fish from both sources over the period. In addition, local catches were by far more than the imported quantity.
Regarding the number of fish caught by fishermen, there were 2677.7 metric tons of fresh fish in 2004, which saw a progressive increase before reaching its peak at 8136.2. Onwards, the local catches decreased continuously, almost halving its 2008 figure, despite a relative upswing to over 5000 in the final surveyed year. Similarly, concerning the total number, there was almost an identical pattern although the peak was a year later, at nearly 9000 metric tons.
In terms of the amount of imported fresh fish, having imported 464.5 metric tons in 2004, Pert saw some fluctuations in this category's figures in the first 5 years before reaching its highest number of importations in 2010, with roughly over 1200 tons. However, this figure started to drop consistently to 782.7 metric tons in 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, regarding, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08743169399 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48483110476 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.5306357674 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206793538397 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100660894626 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549020192521 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138790131119 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043702814161 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.