You Should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The chart given below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part-time.Summarize the information by selecting and report

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The chart given below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part-time.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

Write atleast 150 words

The chart provides information on the total number of men and women pursuing their further education via a full-time or part-time basis, in Britain for the three-time periods: 1970/1971, 1980/81 and 1990/91.

Overall, in every period, part-time education was the most preferred option between both males and females for their higher education. Additionally, the demand for education increased by every period except men's part-time education which showed a fall over the periods.

In the period:1970/71, about 10 million men chose part-time module for their further studies whereas only 1.5 million men enrolled in full-time courses. But the men's preference for part-education in 1980/91; decreased by approximately 1.2 million, which then showed a jump to 9 million in the final period. The full-time education, whereas experienced a steady growth in its popularity, making 2.7 million men enrollments in 1990/91.

In comparison, almost 8 million women joined part-time studies which showed a slight rise to 8.5 million female enrollments in the second period followed by an approximate 30% growth to 11 million in 1990/91. The popularity of full-time education, whereas, skyrocketed from a mere half million by 400% to 2.5 million in the second period and finally settled down to 3 million in the last period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, second, so, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58823529412 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97984386081 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1448230048 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296611223655 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161335165713 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810943852453 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215731640165 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751935310299 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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