You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart represents the percentage of people in Britain bought a variety of music categories albums based on s3x and age. Overall, it is clear from the graph that people aged more than 45 prefers to buy classical music, rock music are mostly bought by people aged between 25 to 34 and pop music are enjoyed by people aged from 25 to 34. Male mostly become the most prominent consumers for respective music categories.
To begin with, people aged 25 to 34 makes up the majority of people who purchase pop music albums around 32%. People aged over more than 45 placed last just under 10%. Male make up the most of majority who buy pop music about 27% while female is approximately around 20%.
Rock music are highly favoured for people aged 25 to 34 about 32%. Similarly to pop music, elderly do not buy music albums as much as compared with people from other ages with only around 8% of the populations.
Interestingly, Classical music are loved more by elderly people at 20%. On the other hand, the percentage of buy classical music bought by people aged 16 to 24 are rather mere 1%. Other than elderly people, people aged 25 to 34 also buy the albums around 17% of total populations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, similarly, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58604651163 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35426956426 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9761837236 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188615512018 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959007273115 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359349418506 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13870201417 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182763646692 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.