You should spend around 20 minutes on this task The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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You should spend around 20 minutes on this task The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts illustrate the ratio of water consumption in six regions across the world, divided into three categories including industrial, agricultural and household purpose.
Overall, it is worth highlighting that water used for agriculture accounts for the largest percentage in most of the regions: Central Asia, Africa, South America, except in North America and Europe which is mainly providing for industrial use. However, it is also noticeable that in South America household uses the highest ratio of water among all regions.
According to the graph, most of the specified areas reveal an identical water usage pattern. Agriculture uses an overwhelming quantity of water in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America account for 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% respectively. Simultaneously, in Central Asia, Africa and South America, the proportion of water used for household is the second biggest user, followed by industry which is make up 5%, 7% and 10% sequentially. While in South East Asia, industry enjoys second highest demand with 12%, followed by the household sector.
In contrast, North America and Europe experience a completely different pattern. Europe area primarily uses water for industry, making up the highest proportion among the remaining regions over a half of the total. Likewise, 48% of water is prioritized this purpose in North America, contrasting to 10% of that in South America. It is also evident that all six areas use an inconsiderable percentage of water for domestic purpose, apart from South America with 19% is the most significant consumption level.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, second, so, while, apart from, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37301587302 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87246771935 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515873015873 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.795708511 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176234944877 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786196855022 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411853086317 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119750080041 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349050952509 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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