The company you work has decided to close the cafeteria, as staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director:
Give reason for low usage
How will it affect the staff
Suggest ways to improve it
Dear Sir,
My name is Emily and I have been working with this company for 5 years. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the concern of closing the office canteen. I request you to review your decision as it will be troublesome for those employees who are using it regularly
There are some reasons as to why most of the office employees have stopped eating from cafe. Firstly, the cost of the food provided is not subsidised as per the signed contract. Furthermore, the team badly lacks in food taste and variety.
However, the decision of closing cafeteria will badly affect regular customers. This situation is particularly more concerning for bachelors because they are not having other source of lunch meals.
Improvement can be brought in current cafe management to attract the employees back to cafe. First of all admin needs to revise the menu and more items such as desserts and drinks should be added to it. Also, finance department should keep an eye to check if the food items are not overpriced.
Looking forward to your positive response on this.
Yours faithfully,
Emily
- You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount Northern Ireland You need somewhere to live while you are there Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In your letter explain your situation describe the accommodation 78
- In many countries in the world some people earn extremely high salaries Some people think that this is good for a country Others think that government should not allow salaries above a certain level Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous 60
- You are studying a short course in another country Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider There is a major problem with accommodation Write a letter to the course provider In your letter Say what the problem is Describe the accommodation y 73
- Write a letter to your local council that road in front of your house is damaged In your letter you should Tell him your name and where are you living Describe the problem Suggest what you want him to do 69
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, as to, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87830687831 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53870130956 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9909877897 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15667952961 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475333469353 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623461093659 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756919799265 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858987350425 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.