The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram depicts the way in which bricks are produced for the building industry
Overall, the process consists of 7 stages, commencing with clay being diggered and end up with delivering them
In the beginning, an excavator is used to digger clay which is then sorted by a metal grid and proceed to a roller. Then, it is added with a combination of sand and water to continue to the formation step which manufactures two types of bricks via wire cutting or putting the mass in a mould.
The bricks are then put into a drying oven in 24 to 48 hours before undergoing two heated kilns. The first one starts with a moderate temperature at around 200C to 980C, while the temperature of the second one is really high ( between 870C and 1300C ). Afterwards, these bricks are moved to a cooling chamber and stay there for 48 to 72 hours prior to being packaged and subsequently delivered to constructions by trucks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...erature of the second one is really high between 870C and 1300C . Afterwards, the...
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Suggestion: .
...e is really high between 870C and 1300C . Afterwards, these bricks are moved to a...
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Suggestion:
...tly delivered to constructions by trucks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, really, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64958238226 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3673959736 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.2 76.5299724578 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 16.8248392259 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219151224101 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904711685798 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792806430472 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148675429232 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138997346941 0.0580467560999 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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