Nowadays many young people are often spending their free time in a shopping center. This has a negative effect on the youth and the society to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Nowadays shopping is many teenagers' choice when they are free. In my opinion, instead of staying at home playing video games or watching TV, it is a good way to relax and have fun with their friends while shopping.
First of all, shopping is like a kind of excise, you need to walk, and going up or down stairs, obviously, this can help your heart beats in a normal rate and stretch your body a bit which is helpful to make your body in a good fit. On the contrary, laying in the sofa or bed playing games is harmful for your health, your heart is not working at healthy rate, your body is still and blood barely pumped. If you ask me which is more healthy for your body, I will definitely choose shopping.
Secondly, shopping offers you an opportunity to hang out with your friends or family. This is the best chance for you to get close with each other, you can talk about things you interested or some funny stuff. Your mental health will appreciate this since people do need communicate to feel good, and need connection to feel not lonely. Shopping is one of the few activities you can do to talk and hang around with people you care.
Last but not the least, shopping is a way to find some new stuff which can interested you. I once find a new book during the shopping, I may never know there are such interesting book in the world if I choose to stay at home instead. If you are the person love finding new things or try different food, shopping is the best way to explorer them.
To recap, shopping is not only good for your health but can be benefit to your mental health, what is more, it can provide you a way to explorer the world around you and discover new book or artefact. This can combine excise and explorer, why you object to it?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...for your body, I will definitely choose shopping. Secondly, shopping offers you an op...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'books'?
Suggestion: books
...y never know there are such interesting book in the world if I choose to stay at hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32024169184 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1927708064 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516616314199 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3103975458 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226375587179 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089456744272 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043034991222 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127955485569 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552983642769 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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