A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Kushal,
Hope you are doing well.
Thanks for your consent to look after my pet and home during my holiday. As you know that, from last three years, i never got a long work off due to higher work load. In this August, i get the chance for work off for two weeks and i have booked a holiday for Europe.
I think that you are very much aware about my home and also like my dog, Jimmy. I want you to take good care of my home as well as my pet and you are capable to do it also. As i am going to Europe, my local number does not work. Contact me on 07935462, if you need any assistance.
I know that you are also a pet lover so it took away my worry off for my dog. There are some information you need to know that Jimmy like to walk in the evening and he took food around 7 O' Clock. The food is available at bottom drawer of cupboard at corner of outdoor garden. I would also like to water the plants at an interval of 2 days. And one more thing, just fed the fish on alternate day.
Thanks and see you after returning from holiday.
Give my respect to your mother.
All the best
Girish
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| 2019-08-24 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
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| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ue to higher work load. In this August, i get the chance for work off for two wee...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... as my pet and you are capable to do it also. As i am going to Europe, my local numb...
^^^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t and you are capable to do it also. As i am going to Europe, my local number doe...
^
Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Clock' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clocks', 'clox'.
Suggestion: Clocks; Clox
...the evening and he took food around 7 O Clock. The food is available at bottom drawer...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, i think, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91220773933 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2598217284 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.75 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227640714801 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758345342291 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075439785667 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132252493144 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585400525068 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.33 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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