Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In world of mordanization, use of computer has now became fundamental for each and every field including education. It is belived that it should be the part of education and various programs of computer incorporated as a teaching tool. On the top of that, solely rely on computer definetiely have certain drawback. In following paragraphs i will discuss both aspects of use of computer and will give my opinon at last.
Let's first talk about the benefits of introducing computer into classroom. As it is a advanced learning process, it incorporated visual and audio aid to teaching. Students learn faster compared to traditional pattern of learning which makes students bored and interestless. For instance, learning the process of life cycle of frog would be easier by watching the videos available of youtube channel or other study channel rather then just reading and reffering pictures in textbook. Introduction of computer based learning process helps to increase curiosity of pupil to learn and also maintain class attendece full. Furthermore, it also reduces teachers work load to explain in detail about certain science projects. Lots of applications are there which are used for distant learning also, so that student can attend classes online if he can not able to attend it physically. For example, in current pandemic situation online computer based teaching has became popular.
On the flip side of this, much use of computer definetily have adverse effect of health as it causes starin on eyes and may leads to headache. Moreover, it is cost efefctive and it require huge data usage which might increases cost of learning. Students become more dependent on computer activity and dont refer even book which is the basic of learning as computer never take place of books. Reading book has much far advantages then working on computer.
Overall, at last in my opinion though use of computer has some drawbacks, it must be introduced into school classroom but never at the cost of student - teacher relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66725200187 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 330.0 20.2975951904 1626% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1672.0 106.682146367 1567% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 330.0 20.7667163134 1589% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297093204011 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297093204011 0.084324248473 352% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182247728288 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570420491902 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 167.4 13.0946893788 1278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -263.47 50.2224549098 -525% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 132.0 11.3001002004 1168% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.61 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.31 8.58950901804 283% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 134.0 10.1190380762 1324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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