A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him her in his her country You have never been there before and need some information before you leave Write a letter to your friend In your letter request advise about a gift for his her family ask abou

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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

request advise about a gift for his/her family

ask about activities and clothing in his/her country

find out about the food

You do NOT need to write any address.

Dear Sangkara,

I recieved your letter and good to know that you are doing well. Thank you very much for inviting us to Srilanka and I am so happy to let you know that we accept your invitation and will plan a visit this year.

We, myself and family, are very excited to see you guys again. Please don;t hesitate to let us know what you wat us to bring from India, specially for your teenager son Jaishurya and younger daughter Mangla.

Since we have never been to Srilanka before, we have few queries for our trip planning. My wife is keen to know how will be waether like at your place in month of December such that we pack our clothes accordingly. Moreover, what are the famous activities near by. I searched on internet and found mountain treckking, sea beaches and jungle safari in close vicinity. However, would like to know your recomendation wehther attraction worth spending time & money and if yes, in which order it should be priortized to manage time & cost constraint. We will also arrange clothing based on your recommendation. Finally, how's the food there specially would like to understand availabilty of vegetarian food as my wife Swodha is vegetarian.

We are too excited for this tour and our children are counting every day to meet you guys. Eager to hear from you and see you soon.

Regards,

Shailabh.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...oreover, what are the famous activities near by. I searched on internet and found mount...
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Line 7, column 616, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: how's
... based on your recommendation. Finally, hows the food there specially would like to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, however, if, moreover, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75536480687 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53466326785 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648068669528 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9522584222 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2307692308 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218307527478 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075732070841 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743062716686 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161804983707 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793794407095 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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