A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
*make suggestions as to how they could make friends
*suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities
*give any extra general advice
Dear arjun
Hello! How are you? Its been so long that we met. I am inscribing this missive , as i came to know , you are facing some problem in adjusting, the environment of your new school.
I know you are very conservative kind of person, and donot involve yourself in some talks. But this time you have to make some of the efforts to adjust in new atmosphere. I would suggest you should have some get together at home, with your classmates, aftet your school. At that time, you can be the part of their friend circle, as well as, they can know you more.
Moreover, by indulging yourself in the various activities, such as, joining any school club or taking part in competitions and debates, can be a good medium of getting comfortable in new surroundings, as I know you are very good in extra curricular activities. If you don't understand anything in your class, don't hesitate to ask to your mates also, by doing this you can actually open up with them. Further, i would say go for picnic in your weekends with them and enjoy playing your favourite sport.
I hope my suggestions would help you further and also waiting to meet you as earliest as possible.
Your truly
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... in extra curricular activities. If you dont understand anything in your class, dont...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...dont understand anything in your class, dont hesitate to ask to your mates also, by ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an actually open up with them. Further, i would say go for picnic in your weekend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60563380282 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5510938915 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7890249597 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199878902181 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790703217653 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602490873444 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109655424613 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493090118274 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.