The line graph illustrates the trends in carbon dioxide emission habits by one person in Britain and three other European countries over 40 years from 1967 to 2007. The figures are given in metric tonnes.
Overall, it is clear that the United Kingdom had the highest emission per person, while the Portuguese released the least gas. Furthermore, the rate of emissions by the Italian and Portuguese inhabitant steadily increased, in contrast to the British and Swedish who experienced a decline.
In 1967, a resident in Britain gave off approximately eleven metric tonnes of CO2, which is the highest quantity shown. For the next ten years, this figure was steady before dropping to about nine metric weight unit by the end of the period. Similarly, a Swedish inhabitant produced around nine metric tonnes at the start of the year, when the figure, however, peaked after a decade to around ten metric tonnes. Following this, it saw a drop to seven metric tonnes in 1987 and a further drop to finish at over five in 2007.
On the contrary, the emitting rates of the other two countries significantly climbed during the given period. The Portuguese emission was around one metric tonne in 1967 but grew strikingly by almost fivefold to end with the same figure as Sweden. Lastly, Italy started with just over four metric tonnes emissions per person and increased dramatically to almost double three decades later after which it remained stayed the same till the concluding year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, similarly, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04365079365 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66435971168 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5797357089 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.222222222 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 4.34317383033 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131553715569 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058696402437 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481256889427 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938513345175 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365815983767 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 8.37731958763 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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