IELTS writing sample: The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in a job position entitled “librarian assistant” which advertised in the college board.
I am a third-year student majoring in computer engineering in computer science school.
When I was in high school, I voluntarily worked in a book store as a sales assistant to help customers in finding their interest books. Furthermore, I am completely familiar with computer programming and creating online database.
I hope I can achieve this job as I need to afford my expense in the university. Moreover, I am passionate in reading and studying novels and scientific books. This position is a good opportunity for me to spend my summer break in the library.
I hope you find me a dedicated person for this job. If you need more information, I am available at your convenience and can be reached by phone or by email.
I am looking forward to hear you soon.
Best regards
Eli Poya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am writing to express my interest in a job position entitled “librarian assis...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h advertised in the college board. I am a third-year student majoring in compu...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llege board. I am a third-year student majoring in computer engineering in com...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am a third-year student majoring in computer engineering in computer science...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...engineering in computer science school. When I was in high school, I voluntarily...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he university. Moreover, I am passionate in reading and studying novels and scie...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I am passionate in reading and studying novels and scientific books. This positi...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and scientific books. This position is a good opportunity for me to spend my su...
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Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...library. I hope you find me a dedicated person for this job. If you need more i...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I hope you find me a dedicated person for this job. If you need more informati...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...hone or by email. I am looking forward to hear you soon. Best regards Eli Poya
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hear you soon. Best regards Eli Poya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82716049383 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06003537421 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8585374875 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0909090909 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126756024696 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441312329918 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386303452865 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619369811182 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408171156018 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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