IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training
Dear manager,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the hospitality and food quality of your renowned restaurant in Ontario.I have visited there yesterday,with a prior reservation for my wedding anniversary.I was unhappy with the entire experience.
There were three major problems.Firstly, the reservation was denied on arrival, we were told by the front office executive that the booking hasn't be recorded due to technical issue.Later, they have arranged a table on the roof-top.Though the ambiance was scenic, the chairs were uncomfortable to sit.Secondly, the food we ordered was Medium-Rare stake.But, they served a complete rare stake.As we never prefer eating an undercooked food, we have requested the waiter to replace the food.To our surprise,the waiter denied it and said " orders placed cannot be returned" in a impolite way.Lastly, the hospitality was miserable as the waiters were busy watching a football match and they were so inattentive.This entire episode has ruined the most important event for me.
Therefore,I demand a complete compensation,and suggest you to improve the service quality of the restaurant.
Thanks and regards,
Anirudh akarsh.P
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... of your renowned restaurant in Ontario.I have visited there yesterday,with a pri...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...n Ontario.I have visited there yesterday,with a prior reservation for my wedding anni...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... reservation for my wedding anniversary.I was unhappy with the entire experience....
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reservation for my wedding anniversary.I was unhappy with the entire experience....
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...e. There were three major problems.Firstly, the reservation was denied on arrival,...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...front office executive that the booking hasnt be recorded due to technical issue.Late...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Later
...asnt be recorded due to technical issue.Later, they have arranged a table on the roof...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
...y have arranged a table on the roof-top.Though the ambiance was scenic, the chairs we...
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on the roof-top.Though the ambiance was scenic, the chairs were uncomfortable to...
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Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...c, the chairs were uncomfortable to sit.Secondly, the food we ordered was Medium-Rare st...
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Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...e food we ordered was Medium-Rare stake.But, they served a complete rare stake.As w...
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Line 9, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
....But, they served a complete rare stake.As we never prefer eating an undercooked f...
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Line 9, column 489, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...equested the waiter to replace the food.To our surprise,the waiter denied it and s...
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Line 9, column 504, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...iter to replace the food.To our surprise,the waiter denied it and said ' orders...
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Line 9, column 581, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a impolite way" with adverb for "impolite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... orders placed cannot be returned' in a impolite way.Lastly, the hospitality was miserable a...
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Line 9, column 584, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ders placed cannot be returned' in a impolite way.Lastly, the hospitality wa...
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Line 9, column 599, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lastly
...not be returned' in a impolite way.Lastly, the hospitality was miserable as the w...
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Line 9, column 717, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ball match and they were so inattentive.This entire episode has ruined the most impo...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...t important event for me. Therefore,I demand a complete compensation,and sugg...
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Line 13, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...erefore,I demand a complete compensation,and suggest you to improve the service qual...
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Line 19, column 16, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: P
... Thanks and regards, Anirudh akarsh.P
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78212290503 4.54256449028 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49013152626 2.54303337028 137% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 16.3608247423 269% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 289.94913347 44.8134815571 647% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.75 76.5299724578 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.75 16.8248392259 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 4.34317383033 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0114263492404 0.216113520407 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00754287215574 0.0766984524023 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0130646378087 0.0603063233224 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0103365332083 0.12726935374 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014618065451 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 8.37731958763 337% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 70.7449484536 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 7.45979381443 306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 8.71597938144 197% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 7.59969072165 150% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 8.62886597938 359% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 8.54432989691 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 8.15463917526 380% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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