Invitation to a friend for party
Reason of party
And why these parties are important
Dear Utkarsh,
Hope this mail finds you better,
I am glad to tell that I am organising a party for all my close ones and for this I want to invite you and your family for my daughter's birthday on 4th Jan 2020.
It's a family and friends get-together and specially planned in a way where all kids and adults can enjoy at the same time.
I love to tell that there are events organised for both and schedule its like mentioned here :
1. 19:00 - Welcome
2. 19:30 - 20:00 - magic show ( for every age children)
3. 20:00 - 20:30 - for all Dad-mom some fun games
4. 20:30 - 20:45 - Cake cutting
5. 20:45 onwards - Food and DJ
I am looking forward to meet you both and our little angel Deepti.
I see all these parties as best way to meet my beloved brothers , sisters , relatives and of course my buddies and colleagues. Otherwise we all have been so busy in life that don't get time for each other
I would ask you to come on time so we can enjoy together this great day
invitation card and address are enclosed
best regards
Rohit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...y daughters birthday on 4th Jan 2020. Its a family and friends get-together and s...
^^^
Line 17, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Welcome 2. 19:30 - 20:00 - magic show for every age children 3. 20:00 - 20:3...
^^
Line 19, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...- 20:30 - for all Dad-mom some fun games 4. 20:30 - 20:45 - Cake cutting 5. 20:...
^^^^
Line 27, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...- Food and DJ I am looking forward to meet you both and our little angel Deepti. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as best way to meet my beloved brothers , sisters , relatives and of course my bu...
^^
Line 29, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ay to meet my beloved brothers , sisters , relatives and of course my buddies and ...
^^
Line 29, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...nd of course my buddies and colleagues. Otherwise we all have been so busy in life that d...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e we all have been so busy in life that dont get time for each other I would ask y...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57068062827 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22372027679 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685863874346 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.561325107 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146527563804 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488819172696 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420437725475 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467701651769 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507181893283 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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