Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
thank them for the photos and for the holiday
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
dear Alicia and Pinto
Thank you so much for the photos of our wonderful time together. I have framed the one where we are at the zoo and kept it on my bedside table.It brings back such great memories of the holiday we had together.
When I opened your letter, I felt guilty for not writing back to you earlier. However, when you will hear my excuse, you willl forgive me. After I came back from your place,there were torrential raind and flooding in our area. You must have seen the pictures in the news or read about it online. It was horiffying! there was water everywhere and I lost alot of my belongings, either the furniture was submerged or it was damaged beyond repair. I am waiting for the situation to get better like everyone else.
With most of my belongings, I lost my contact book and it had your number, I waited to speak to Carlos to get your address. Hopefully, once the weather clears up, we will have good summer. Anyway, I would love to have you here for the summer, we can visit a little quaint town and go for sight seeing. I desperately hope you dont think i am rude or ungreatful.
Please let me know when you are free. Looking for ward to seeing you soon.
Lots of love
Emma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear Alicia and Pinto Thank you so much for...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...the zoo and kept it on my bedside table.It brings back such great memories of the ...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ve me. After I came back from your place,there were torrential raind and flooding in o...
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Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ead about it online. It was horiffying! there was water everywhere and I lost alot of...
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Line 6, column 327, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or sight seeing. I desperately hope you dont think i am rude or ungreatful. Pleas...
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Line 6, column 338, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eing. I desperately hope you dont think i am rude or ungreatful. Please let me...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r ward to seeing you soon. Lots of love Emma
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36725663717 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31988833815 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0510758578 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335835243763 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104170495867 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821728635078 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15530316581 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797597526974 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.