Last Month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends.
They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends, In your letter
1) Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
2) Explain why you didn't write earlier
3) invite to come and stay with you.
Dear Manoj and Suvarna,
'hope you guys are doing well! how is our little Chacha? her school must be started by now, right?
Yesterday, I received the package of photos you sent. The photobook of our Chicago trip is amazing. I cannot believe it's a month now, I miss our talk and those games you invented during the long drive. I do not have enough words to thank for spending time with me and capturing such beautiful photos. The pitchers are really great. I like all the snaps specially the night view of city. Manoj, you did a great job, all photos are clear and magnificent.
I also want to apologies for not sending any letter last month. Actually, I was waiting for photos from our vacation, beside I got busy with some work assignments. As you mentioned in your letter that, you and Suvarna might get some time off next month. instead of planning something else, why won't you guys come here? My family and I will be very happy to host you. We can have lots of fun. I will show you some of historical places in my city. Please plan and let me know when you are coming, I will make pick up arrangements for you.
See you soon!
With love
Shripad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...Suvarna, hope you guys are doing well! how is our little Chacha? her school must b...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Her
...e doing well! how is our little Chacha? her school must be started by now, right? ...
^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...icago trip is amazing. I cannot believe its a month now, I miss our talk and those ...
^^^
Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...rna might get some time off next month. instead of planning something else, why wont yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22377146886 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1052220151 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.5555555556 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9444444444 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366960440283 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100559586656 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784117297926 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153503130145 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138908981806 0.0580467560999 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.