Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stay at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
Thank them for the holiday and the photos
Explain why you didn´t write earlier
Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Katherine and Maria
I hope that this letter finds you very well. I can't believe the time has passed since we saw in the holidays.
I don't know how to thank you for all the attention I received from you and your family in those days. It was wonderful. Also, I saw the marvelous pictures you sent me, and immediately the memories come back, the view of the beach from your terrace, the sunsets in that great restaurant and of course the perfect color of the sea.
I am so sorry; I couldn't write before because I was so busy moving out and sincerely it was so stressful, it took me two weeks to settle down in the small apartment that I got.
As you know, the next month is my birthday, and I would be delighted if you could come that weekend, of course, you can stay with me in my tiny but gorgeous new place, you will love it. I hope that you can make it.
Love
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...that this letter finds you very well. I cant believe the time has passed since we sa...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...passed since we saw in the holidays. I dont know how to thank you for all the ...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ssed since we saw in the holidays. I dont know how to thank you for all the atten...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... color of the sea. I am so sorry; I couldnt write before because I was so busy movi...
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Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it. I hope that you can make it. Love Maria
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21637426901 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18181170481 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7275365963 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.125 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253382639221 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884882677734 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830801380465 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107560770511 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882401601595 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.