Letter to friend who you remember the most.
Dear my best friend, F
Today, 1st May, I remembered some memories about our story that may become a long story for me. I attempt to forget everything since you're married two months ago but my effort is always failed. So, I decide to not forget anything again. Once again, I try to be brave to look at your pic in new life, with your partner, and now, I'm realized that I can give you a smile and pray you are happy more than before even though you're not beside me again. Therefore, I will not keep the hatred toward you anymore, but I have to say sorry because I will not make a contact to you until unlimited time of my heart. That's my promise cause I don't wanna disturb happiness everyone even you always say that I am still your family, still I will keep my promise. Beside that, I wanna say many thank to Rainbow Maker because He made me to meet you, person who understand me without I have to say everything, person who never mad to me and always make effort to make me happy in all your ways, in 3 years ago. Again, I wanna say thank also to you cause you made my day feel complicated but I received many lessons from you until now.
In the last word, Please, be Happy my best friend, F
One day, I hope, I will feel that my real love story is better than drama as you have started with your long-last partner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...e. I attempt to forget everything since youre married two months ago but my effort is...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...n new life, with your partner, and now, Im realized that I can give you a smile an...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... are happy more than before even though youre not beside me again. Therefore, I will ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...o you until unlimited time of my heart. Thats my promise cause I dont wanna disturb h...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e of my heart. Thats my promise cause I dont wanna disturb happiness everyone even y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1439688716 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10957390211 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7315532645 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168568498737 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677835116204 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435497635272 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974719487281 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370499440675 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.