On local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write to the hospital:
- Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
- Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to
- Give detailed of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to you in regard to your announcement which is distinct your demand of some staff for voluntary tasks. I am a fresh graduated from the University of Medical Science; if I desire to continue my field, I should obtain some related experiences while working as a voluntary. Besides, my accommodation located near the hospital; because of this, I am willing to occupy a position at the hospital.
As you are aware, there is a wide range of activities which are traced back to my major. Firstly, I could visit patients and recommend them to a specialist. Therefore, I am keen to consult people who have a drug addicted to tide them over and get back their health again; I would appreciate it if you consider my abilities for these sections.
I am really pleased to let you know that I would have a vast amount of time to allocate for this unpaid job; however, I must study for my higher education’s system requirements. Owing to, I would be at your service from early in the morning until evening each day of the week during this summer.
I am absolutely delighted to participate in your voluntary program.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Kind Regards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, you know, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64351851852 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82429795712 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.664553455 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 4.34317383033 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198777585255 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621086702392 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420537374034 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918557929834 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562381955025 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.