You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it describe the meal you had and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting

Essay topics:

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to share my positive review for the Yummy Restaurant that I believe is a worth visiting dining establishment in our area.

We celebrated my sister's birthday party last week at this restaurant. Originally, I thought only twenty people would attend, but apparently, the number increased to thirty. I was worried that it would not be possible for the restaurant to accommodate more people without prior notice. However, I was pleasantly surprised when the Manager told me that they could do it and would even upgrade our room to a more spacious one. The overall service was impeccable and the party was a hit, thanks to the great staff and their professionalism.

We ordered a three-course set menu and the taste was top-notch. The escargot entree was absolutely divine that I could still remember the taste of its garlic butter sauce. My sister ordered pan-fried salmon fillet with mashed potatoes as the main course, and people were raving about it. The dessert was a mini-opera which I thought to be rather average, though it might simply because I do not have sweet teeth.

Overall, we experienced a wonderful night at this restaurant. This place is highly recommended and we have even started planning our next visit. I believe you should publish an article regarding this establishment in your 'Fine diners' section so that people can learn about this fabulous place.

Thank you in advance.

Yours faithfully,

Helen Lim

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, regarding, so, still, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76019037392 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.218136394 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1333333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110574433903 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386052193726 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470571986259 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826371881945 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054653357936 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.