Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something
You bought from them. In your letter include:
• What you bought
• What the problem is
• Why you want a refund
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to lodge a solicitation for a refund of a car I recently purchased from your company representative.
To elaborate this, due to your after sale services agreement, which I read closely prior to purchasing this car, its engine is bound to have a 12-month no-quibble warranty. It is also agreed to be compensated in the form of full refund in the first 3 months, if any difficulty it encounters. But unfortunately it broke down within merely a couple of weeks after employing.
This was extremely disappointing to me as I was a loyal customer of your brand. Although your delegate attempted to persuade me to be agreed with an engine repair, stuck in the middle of highway was an absolutely horrible experience which I do not want to even envisage it again.
I trust you will appreciate how terrible was the situation. Thus, based on our deal, I expect you to confirm a full refund as the compensation.
I look forward to your prompt response; your due consideration will be greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Vahid Alvandi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, thus, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89617486339 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1049986237 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2813352092 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160455155506 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602589113106 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541585120396 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946795988966 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069899251922 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.