Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include:
• What the problem was
• Why this problem has upset you
• What you want to happen as a result of your letter
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction about the inappropriate treatment which I experienced recently in one of your stores. Allow me to elaborate on what has occurred.
I visited the main branch of your hypermarket chain previous week in Saturday. As usual, I firstly referred to grocery store section in order to buy some fresh vegetables. However, I realized some items are finished and some the others are not as high quality as I expected. Thus, I call the store supervisor, Mr. Smith, to notify him the situation. Surprisingly, he reacted in such a rude manner which was by no means acceptable. To make things even worst, the security guard leaded me by force to the exit door while I was complaining about the matter. Due to this, I have been highly disappointed first by inadequate quality of the materials and then by the improper and impolite treatment of your staff.
I trust you will appreciate how terrible was the situation. Hence, I expect you to reprimand those personnel who were involved in this regard and conduct more supervision on employing and training your employees to ensure they deeply comprehend how to respect to the customers right as their reactions can easily damage the prestige of your company.
Your due consideration would be greatly appreciated.
Faithfully yours,
Vahid Alvandi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to express my d...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this personnel' or 'those personnels'?
Suggestion: this personnel; those personnels
...ation. Hence, I expect you to reprimand those personnel who were involved in this regard and co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95199690282 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674107142857 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.465831912 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2307692308 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174310579629 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481911180155 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407837495924 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980057345716 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385638973263 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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