In this modern era, there are some remarkable changes that are observed in younger generation. One of the highliting feature is lack of respect towards their parents which leads to some drawbacks. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this attitude.
To begin with, there is vast difference in equations between relationships of children with their parents. In comparision with past times, it has become more friendly. Children easily share and communicate for what they want or about their opinions which was not the case before. For instance, earlier if a child wants something he has to make multiple efforts in convincing his parents. Moreover, parents attitude towards their children has also changed. Especially in teenage they will try to be more friendly. This might make relations taken for granted and loose respect.
The other reson could be the way children are raised. If they see that their own parents are not paying attension or take care of their own parents, they are likely to follow the same. A child's mind is too fragile. They will learn from what they observe. In most of the western countries, parent child relations has become more casual. They will meet once in a month or hardly talk on phone so gradually the warmth and necessity of any relationship is going to fed. All these negative consequences are harmful for any society.
To conclude, the more casual relations be the less respect and care is seen. Parents attitude in raising their child also plays major role. There must be good balance between friendly relations and showing respect
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'feed'
Suggestion: feed
...cessity of any relationship is going to fed. All these negative consequences are ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02281368821 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47563266705 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9166616915 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.05 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.15 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232696360407 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065341608123 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424280494618 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133266830426 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428509625376 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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