Write a letter to the manager of a theater about an accident that happened to your friend. You want to tell the manager that you were satisfied of the help you received during the incident.
In your letter, you should tell:
* how it happened
* what you were helped
* what you want them to do to prevent the accident to happen again.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection to an accident occurred recently in your theater.
It was last Saturday night when my friends and I went to your theater for the show Liangzhu. There was a severe thunder storm in the evening and probably the lightning hit some electronic equipment or electricity pole nearby, which resulted in the fire at the back of the theater. All the audience were frightened, including us, but fortunately all the staffs there reacted rapidly. They evacuated audience and put out the fire at the same time, and nobody was injured. We left our personal belongings inside because of the rush, but one of the staffs, Joe Han found our stuff and nothing was missing.
We really appreciate the quick reaction and assistance from your employees, whereas I believe you should recruit a professional team to examine the layout of your theater, pinpoint the potential reason of this accident and do some modifications accordingly. In this way, you could avoid the same issue in the future.
I want to thank your staffs for their help and I hope you could take my advice into account.
Your faithfully,
Jerry Wang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...me, and nobody was injured. We left our personal belongings inside because of the rush, but one of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, really, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62843732805 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0770488989 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239388360008 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833321072508 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691756232886 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155809560548 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635188977546 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.