Nowadays people are moving to other countries for work. Some people say that it is difficult for children lives, others think that its better for them. Discuss both views and Give your opinion.
It is becoming a trend that people move to foreign countries for their job purpose. Someone claims that it would be tough for their children's lives, yet I believe that it is also beneficial for them in some ways.
On the one hand, the ability of children to get adjusted to a new environment is not strong compared with adults, therefore they may encounter difficulties living in the new place. For instance, they might not enjoy the local food in a new country, which could result in potential health issues. In addition, children who maintained steady relationships with their friends and classmates in one place have to to make new friends after relocating. It could cost extra time and effort for the children and probably lead to mental pressures if they face any obstacles socializing with children in the local area.
On the other hand, moving to a new country can be a wonderful experience in children's lives. First of all, they can view plenty of beautiful sceneries, learn about local history and appreciate the culture of the new country, which will broaden their horizons. Additionally, living in a new country means children may acquire the opportunity to learn a new language, which is extremely helpful for their future. They could gain more knowledge through the new language and it will be a valuable treasure among their whole lives. Moreover, children have to handle more burdens and grow up more independently if they move to a new environment, since they will receive much less direct assistance from their relatives or friends in their hometown. This will help them get more prepared for the future in the society.
To sum up, it is understandable that some parents worry about their children if they have to move to a new country, whereas there are also abundant benefits for children to grow up better living in a new country. Parents should consider about the pros and cons thoroughly and make the correct decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65527179768 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0867644274 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21392403711 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912925804855 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749677257342 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161068433225 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789751957098 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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