Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays social media plays a pivotal role in connecting people globally even though sharing personal information on the website does have some risks. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate the merits and demerits of using social media and put forward my opinion.
First and foremost there are a plethora of advantages associated with social media the most preponderant one being easy of connectivity between people living in different continents. With social media applications like Facebook, Instagram and WhatsApp gaining popularity among people of all ages and giving flexibility to users to share and view content. In a recent survey in India by economic times around ninety-five per cent from all age groups prefer using social media websites as the most convenient mode to stay connected.
Secondly with the proliferation of internet applications and the abundance of interesting material available on these applications which attracts users globally serving as a knowledge source. To elucidate in a recent survey from Facebook, people prefer to watch videos posted to acquire knowledge and get acquainted with the latest updates globally.
With so many advantages of social media, there are myriads of disadvantages the preponderant one being the security aspect. As people enter personal information while creating accounts on Facebook and Instagram there is a constant threat of this information being stolen or hacked. In the recent past, many accounts and subsequently personal information from social media giant Facebook were hacked thus making this subject contentious.
On the other hand, Social media websites data is being used by various information technology teams at the time of elections to influence the public and get their vote. In India, this has happened many times thus questioning the intent of these websites as they abuse the personal information of users.
Thus looking at both the sides and elucidating it becomes evident that merits outweigh the demerits. Though social media has some security issues it plays a critical role of an enabler for people to stay connected globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45757575758 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81607774175 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4660930557 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.642857143 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390100175791 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140960280659 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915152387048 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201871458313 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113145299892 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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