You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Vineet Jain and I attended a meeting at hotel "Regency Towers" last friday. Unfortunately,I forgot some very important papers at the hotel.I realised the same while I returned home and searching few of them.
The meeting was in the basement at conference room.I believe I left the papers there on the table itself.They are so important because it has confidential information about the stakeholders of the company.In any case, the papers should not be misplaced.As your staff was so supportive,I would like to suggest if they can help in finding out those papers.It would be a great help.
Also,I would like to request that once your staff hand over them to you,please keep them at a safe place like a drawer with keys. I will come and collect them today evening by 6:00pm
I am sure you will understand this and soon begin the search of papers as a matter of urgency.
Yours sincerely,
Vineet Jain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Vineet Jain and I attended a ...
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... Towers' last friday. Unfortunately,I forgot some very important papers at th...
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Suggestion: I
...some very important papers at the hotel.I realised the same while I returned home...
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...eturned home and searching few of them. The meeting was in the basement at confe...
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... was in the basement at conference room.I believe I left the papers there on the ...
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...ft the papers there on the table itself.They are so important because it has confide...
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...n about the stakeholders of the company.In any case, the papers should not be misp...
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...ase, the papers should not be misplaced.As your staff was so supportive,I would li...
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...isplaced.As your staff was so supportive,I would like to suggest if they can help ...
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...ey can help in finding out those papers.It would be a great help. Also,I would l...
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... papers.It would be a great help. Also,I would like to request that once your st...
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...at once your staff hand over them to you,please keep them at a safe place like a drawer...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
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Suggestion: this evening
...with keys. I will come and collect them today evening by 6:00pm I am sure you will understa...
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...and collect them today evening by 6:00pm I am sure you will understand this and s...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s a matter of urgency. Yours sincerely, Vineet Jain
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...gency. Yours sincerely, Vineet Jain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84662576687 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81282824039 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705521472393 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.87128811 44.8134815571 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 16.8248392259 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288323704406 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114995210465 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506054194964 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148080147064 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424159857337 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.