Writing task 1 (a letter)
You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter:
– When and where did the talk take place?
– Explain why the members enjoyed it.
– Suggest another lecture to be done in the future.
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to thank you for taking out time from your busy schedule and giving a guest lecture on leading a healthy life at our club "The Gymkhana" last week. it was one of the most interesting sessions from an expert in the industry.
To elucidate all the club members thoroughly enjoyed the session as it was the most knowledgeable and interactive sessions for improving health by doing regular exercise. We don't get many experts from the industry in this club who can share practical examples and tips on how a balanced diet and sports activity can lead to healthy living. For young members of our club, it was engaging as you laid several facts which helped to understand the ill effects of smoking and drinking.
Since this was a captivating session I would like to invite you for another session to share more knowledge on a similar subject so that it helps adults to mend their habits which can help them to adopt a healthy lifestyle.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely
Brain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...lub 'The Gymkhana' last week. it was one of the most interesting session...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ng health by doing regular exercise. We dont get many experts from the industry in t...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and seeing you soon. Yours sincerely Brain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76315789474 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54238856436 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5313301336 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210075524295 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799052861374 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541785412122 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114058295416 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843099087643 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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