You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture Write a letter to your landlord In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furnit

Essay topics:

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.

Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter

introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take

I am Anand, residing at 10, Park Tower, Ottawa, Canada as your tenant. I am writing this letter to bring it to your kind attention to the condition of the Dining Table and the Wooden Sofa furnished in the house. Please allow me to elaborate.

It is clearly stated in the rental agreement that the house shall be furnished with wooden furnitures in proper condition. Within 3 months, however, the few of Dining Table chairs started to wobble and the termites started to infect the corners of the Sofa. It has become increasingly difficult to reside in this situation. Although we tried to solve it by ourselves, It has gone beyond our financial limit.

Your timely action is required in this matter. Please reach out to any seasoned carpenter and fix these problems before it aggravates. If it is not fixed within the next two weeks, we have no option other than vacating the house as per the contract.

Thanks for your understanding.

Yours Sincerely,
Anand.

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Essays by user anandfnc :

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88554216867 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59154498039 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.990276596 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162357001689 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597799768655 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654693643845 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09311555558 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536970985154 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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