You and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him.
In the letter, you should:
• apologies
• explain what reasons you can’t make it
• give options what can be done with the ticket.
Dear John,
Hope you are well and excited about the upcoming movie “Avenger”. However, I will not be able join you in this coming Friday as I have to go to my native place. I extremely sorry for this sudden plan drop. Although I can feel you agony, my presence in my home is much important.
Actually, yesterday I received a call from my brother that mother had to undergo a surgery on this Friday. Although I was aware of the situation, I did not expect that my mother had to go for surgery so early. As per doctor advice, it is better to have the operation as soon as problem. Otherwise, situation may become adverse. That is why my family immediately book the available slot for this surgery.
We can cancel the tickets easily without any penalty as I opted free cancelation service with additional Rs. 50 while booking tickets. Otherwise, you can go with my cousin as he has been waiting for this movie from last one year.
I hope you can understand my situation and my sincere apology once again for the inconvenience.
Regards,
Bibhu Kalita
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67195767196 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77786344035 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2297570675 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9230769231 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181056006824 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060631783194 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654230676851 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13240826519 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722973565886 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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