You are attending a night course in the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should say:
-which course you are studying
-what things you are not happy about
-what you expect the school director to do
Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter to the best of your knowledge in reviewing my feedback on the recently launched evening course that I have taken last month.
The course held three days a week in the evening around 7 pm at your prestigious institution and it teaches us about the competitive programming skills in the tech world. Therefore, I believe you would get the course name and if you do not, let me tell you the course name is "Advanced Coding Skills". Not only this course teaches us about the fundamentals of coding, but also covers the data structures and algorithms which are crucial to be a flawless Software Engineering.
However, some parts of the content in the above two areas of coding were uncovered in this course. As I said, both of the above-mentioned areas play a vital role in the career of Software Engineering, I suggest you reconsider and review the curriculum of this newly launched course and stop it because it will be worthless for students and working professionals like me to spend any learning on Advanced Coding Skills.
It would be best to my knowledge that you could take suggestions from experienced industry professionals that is from top-notch tech firms to reform the curriculum of the course and update with new content on your website. I'll be happy to re-enroll and learn from your institution since you take your pupils seriously to become rock-solid in their careers.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...pdate with new content on your website. Ill be happy to re-enroll and learn from yo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95736434109 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88251464726 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0167703719 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363452212538 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133310609147 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759311619877 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193744352668 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597035476327 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.