You have been placed to a new job as same as your friend is doing in another company. Write a letter to your friend to ask for help.
In the letter, you should:
- what the problem is
- how your friend can solve it
- tell him meeting arrangements and details.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. Firstly, I would like to apologize for not being in touch of late, due to the work pressure and deadlines. Secondly, I would like to share this big news of me being appointed as an IB educator in Carmel school.
I have started my job couple of months back, but I am facing some issues regarding the planning and the programming part as per the IB guidelines. There was an orientation session at the start of the year for the new employees, which hardly covered the planning bit.
Since, you have been an IB educator for a long time, I am sure you must be a pro at your job. As I am lacking training in the programming software of IB, my work is being affected tremendously.
If possible, we could meet on Saturday at the Freddy’s café in the morning and you could assist me with some techniques and methods to deal with this problem. Would be awaiting for your reply.
Warm regards,
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[2]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ure you must be a pro at your job. As I am lacking training in the programming software of...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 174, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
...ods to deal with this problem. Would be awaiting for your reply. Warm regards, Alex
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...waiting for your reply. Warm regards, Alex
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58409690573 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7274513321 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152803424548 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600190927016 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657005613582 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919854688349 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403607046465 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.