In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is opinion about this?
Nowadays, the advantages and disadvantages of “curfew” implemented in some areas of US are debatable among parents. While some of them focus on its benefits, some of them argue that it creates more damage than benefits. In my opinion, the implementation of this rule is not suitable for this century.
First of all, parents who claim this rule serve not only teenagers but also parents. Thanks to this rule, teenagers can keep away from some risky activities such as driving or hanging out late . In addition, this rule makes parents peace of mind. Parents can be sure about their children not getting involved any violence or crime on the streets at a certain time.
In the other hand, some of them advocates this rule causes some drawbacks for both sides. This rule makes parents being more autocratic so their children can avoid any shares with them when facing to dangerous situation. Additionally, some teenagers can want to work part-time during studying. This rule prevents teenagers to work late while they are studying.
In conclusion, the implementation of this rule include both advantages and disadvantages into itself. It is as soon as disputable topic, in my opinion imposing this rule cannot be applied to keep up with the necessities of this century. As parents turn into autocratic from friendly approach, teenagers can miss some job opportunities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89710509815 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1082803964 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4285714286 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213861316322 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823168411676 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307770432376 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139113487442 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152948933652 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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