You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you have moved
• describe the new house
• invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Thomas,
I am writing to you know that at last we have moved to minimalist ranch house in seaside town. We just couldn’t go on living in metropolis. Our daughter left from our home to study in Ankara and my husband was retired on this January. Thus, we decided to look ranch house in seaside town and finally here we are in our new home.
I’m sure you’ll like it. There is only one bedroom, bathroom and kitchen. Although we have small home than previous one, we have huge farm on the house to cultivate many vegetables, fruits and feed animals. We have already 3 cows and 5 chicken and we cultivate tomato, cucumber, eggplant, potato. We can easily live with a smell budget.
Why don’t you come round this weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden.
Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you.
Lots of love,
Julia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have moved to minimalist ranch house in seaside town. We just couldn't go o...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41176470588 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30928137365 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1212569481 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4615384615 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16400531824 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577511686314 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612734481823 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106860448567 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403793891493 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.