You are panning a holiday to Scotland. You have been given the name and address of a hotel near the sea and would like further information.write a letter to the hotel.Ask for information about hotel’s exact location and facilities.Ask about the availabi

Essay topics:

You are panning a holiday to Scotland. You have been given the name and address of a hotel near the sea and would like further information.
write a letter to the hotel.
Ask for information about hotel’s exact location and facilities.
Ask about the availability of the rooms. Explain any special requirements you have and ask whether the hotel can accommodate them. .

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire more information about your hotel.
Firstly, please let me know the exact hotel's location. Is this the former Columbus hotel, between the laundry and the convenience store? It is argued by some that your restaurant closes late at night. As I will be in leisure activities until 10 pm, could you tell me what time the restaurant closes?
Secondly, I would like to know if there are available rooms with sight for the sea in July. I will need four double rooms, with air conditioning and minibar.
Finally, my uncle Jorge has special needs. It is difficult for him to climb stairs. Can you tell me if there are elevators and other facilities for disabled people such as ramps and handrail in the hotel?
I would appreciate your time and attention to these questions. Thank you for your kindness.

Yours faithfully,
Anna chandler

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
... Firstly, please let me know the exact hotels location. Is this the former Columbus h...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82236842105 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52678689412 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717105263158 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3229825112 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.3846153846 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211263674404 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647689729259 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573490179625 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117184432689 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042783749135 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.49 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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