You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
• Why you need a holiday.
• Your holiday plans.
• Why you need your friend to join with you.
Dear Mathew,
Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I am writing to ask you to join me for a vacation, as I am planning a short trip to Singapore for a week. I have recently told you about the kind of stress I have gone through at the office. Thus, it is quite crucial for me to take a step back and reevaluate my life by taking a vacation.
Singapore is a Metropolis with many interesting places to explore. I am in touch with a local travel agency who can arrange the trip for us including the stamping of visas. We can visit all the attractions like the zoo, river safari, night safari, city museum, gardens by the bay, east coast park. Sentosa island is the best manmade islands around the world and it on my must do list, we can do a lot of adventure activities like roller coaster rides and explore theme parks. On top of this, there are many beautiful islands with white sand beaches and clear water near to the mainland.
Why don’t you join with me on this adventure?. You always wanted to travel overseas and this is a golden opportunity. If you come along then I am sure this vacation will become more exciting and I could really use your tour management skills.
I look forward to your reply.
Warm wishes
vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, then, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42672413793 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38840948151 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64224137931 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1543577832 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3571428571 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228081764971 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777816745354 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791230620872 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147354078668 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079122102296 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.