You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER REGARDING THE ALLOWANCE FOR LEAVE FOR NEXT FEW DAYS.
I WOULD LIKE TO BRING TO YOUR NOTICE THAT MY MOTHER HAS BEEN DIAGNOSED WITH FRACTURE IN HER LEFT KNEE. THE DOCTOR HAS SUGGESTED TO PLAN A SURGERY FOR KNEE REPLACEMENT AT THE EARLIEST POSSIBILITY. AS, MY MOTHER LIVES ALONE IN WASHINGTON SHE NEEDS SOMEBODY TO SUPPORT HER DURING SUCH MEDICAL EMERGENCY. THEREFORE, I NEED TO VISIT HER AND PERFORM THE EXPECTED DUTIES.THE SURGERY HAS BEEN PLANNED ON 8TH NOVEMBER FOLLOWED BY HOSPITALISATION FOR 3 DAYS.TAKING THE ABOVE DATES INTO CONSIDERATION, I AM PLANNING TO STAY THERE FROM 7TH NOVEMBER TO 12TH NOVEMBER.
I REQUEST YOU TO SANCTION ME THE LEAVES ON THE ABOVE MENTIONED DATES. MEANWHILE, I WILL KEEP UPDATING MY PROJECT WORK ONLINE. I WILL KEEP UPLOADING THE DATA EVERY MORNING ON THE COMPANY PORTAL.
I HOPE YOU EMPATHISE WITH MY SITUATION AND WILL GRANT ME THE PERMISSION FOR THE SAME.
YOURS FAITHFULLY
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'SUGGESTED planning'.
Suggestion: SUGGESTED planning
...ACTURE IN HER LEFT KNEE. THE DOCTOR HAS SUGGESTED TO PLAN A SURGERY FOR KNEE REPLACEMENT AT THE E...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “AS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...EPLACEMENT AT THE EARLIEST POSSIBILITY. AS, MY MOTHER LIVES ALONE IN WASHINGTON SH...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95031055901 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82601187533 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7431698157 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139741532609 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619718677634 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054988332772 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752057167179 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161905823259 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.